Honestly, at this point I don't even know what to say. This story makes my soul ache in the best possible way. Your writing is so vivid, it is hard to believe that I'm not actually there, watching it unfold, feeling the grief and turmoil that they feel.
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branchandroot
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Date: 2010-05-04 01:47 am (UTC)