You know, you have yet to end a chapter where I don't think "I had no idea that was coming". Masterfully done.
As would be expected, the writing is superb. My absolute favorite descriptions -odd though it may seem- are the little things you write about Watson, from the expressions on his face to the way he moves his hands. When he tried to shield his face from Holmes' scrutiny, my heart actually leapt a little, as such attention to the smallest detail is my heart's desire. It makes a piece so rich and visual; I always have, in my mind's eye, a clear and exact picture of this story. You paint it so vividly.
I do hope Holmes was able to keep it together enough to read the part where Watson imagined Holmes in the place of his attacker. How their world will change...
Mycroft's door... I shall have to play the Watson here because I do not know how this was the next step, Holmes.
As for the clamor for more, well, you only have yourself to blame. Your outstanding writing has ingrained in me the strangest hours. Still... completely worth it.
It's like a light goes off in my head when you update...
You know, you have yet to end a chapter where I don't think "I had no idea that was coming". Masterfully done.
As would be expected, the writing is superb. My absolute favorite descriptions -odd though it may seem- are the little things you write about Watson, from the expressions on his face to the way he moves his hands. When he tried to shield his face from Holmes' scrutiny, my heart actually leapt a little, as such attention to the smallest detail is my heart's desire. It makes a piece so rich and visual; I always have, in my mind's eye, a clear and exact picture of this story. You paint it so vividly.
I do hope Holmes was able to keep it together enough to read the part where Watson imagined Holmes in the place of his attacker. How their world will change...
Mycroft's door... I shall have to play the Watson here because I do not know how this was the next step, Holmes.
As for the clamor for more, well, you only have yourself to blame. Your outstanding writing has ingrained in me the strangest hours. Still... completely worth it.